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Thursday, 19 December 2019

When i went to the moon

Today we had to make a poem about you being on the moon.

3 comments:

  1. Greetings Akuhata!
    I have done this activity before. Do you enjoy doing these summer learning journey task?

    if so, Keep up the good work! :)

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  2. Kia ora Akuhata

    Well done for having a go at making up a poem about how Neil Armstrong must have felt when he first stepped on the moon. How do you feel about poetry?
    I love it, because I enjoy playing with words - for instance:

    "I was skipping along the moon,
    And when I turned I began to swoon,
    I gasped. It was the Earth"

    Imagine being on the moon! I imagine feeling really shocked seeing the Earth from that point of view. What could you rhyme with 'over' - for full points for this activity please respond to this!

    Ngā mihi,
    Jordan

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  3. Hi Akuhata,

    Good job for giving a go to making a poem on Neil Armstrong. Do you like poems. I've also done this task before. Did you enjoy the task.

    Otherwise good job!

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