LI: To edit our writing using DRAFT.
This week for writing we wrote abstract noun poems in pairs. We were learning about abstract noun. abstract noun our something that exists but cannot be touched. Our abstract noun poem was about Peace. An abstract noun includes the 5 senses (Touch/ feel, taste, hear, see and smell), punctuation ( Capital letters, .), complex sentences, metaphors and similes After we finished writing our poems we used the DRAFT (Delete, Rearrange, Add, Fix, Talk) process to check our poem with draft we can make correct errors in our writing.
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ReplyDeleteHi I'm Kevin from Belfast school.I like the way that you put a peace photo on the drawing. Next time you could make it bigger so people see it better.Why did you do peace?
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