Wow this is such a great example of an intricute portrait of yours! I really like how fun and funny your Comic strip is. I really like how you have explained the beginning of the story, which gives readers a image in their head. Maybe next time try to add a little bit more details about the story, and what you did. Also try to have a persuasive Title in your blogs, so that you can hook the readers attention.
What do you think they felt at the end of the story?
Malo e lelei Akuhata,
ReplyDeleteWow this is such a great example of an intricute portrait of yours! I really like how fun and funny your Comic strip is. I really like how you have explained the beginning of the story, which gives readers a image in their head. Maybe next time try to add a little bit more details about the story, and what you did. Also try to have a persuasive Title in your blogs, so that you can hook the readers attention.
What do you think they felt at the end of the story?
Keep up the good work!
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- Sulia